Trifecta Weekend Writing Challenge: A 33-Word Letter of Apology Try #2

For this week’s challenge, you have to write a letter of apology in exactly 33 words. Addresses, salutations, closings, etc. (should you wish to include them) do not count in the 33 words.

Try #2

What happened to your shockingly-sensational, silk sari sipping Seven-up in the surrey at six on Saturday certainly sucks seriously.

Super sorry about your sari, Sarah.

P.S.  Oh and sorry about the Salmonella too.

Sid

Sarah

35 Responses to Trifecta Weekend Writing Challenge: A 33-Word Letter of Apology Try #2

  1. Ouch! Well, better 7-up than Coke, in the case of a yellow sari…. good one.. if a bit alliterative (right word? hmm… perhaps I mean sublimely sibilant…) :-)

  2. Supremely silly. I’m stupidly searching for “s” terms to sincerely say that I enjoyed this, but my mind is sadly sapped of proper words. So sorry. Anyway, niccccccccccccely done.

  3. Hahahaha! I’m glad that you worked the word, “Salmonella” into the apology. It wouldn’t have been the same without it. Sarah is much more relatable now that I picture her wretching over a toilet bowl!

  4. Alliteration always adds absolute adoration! Awesome!

  5. My sincere apology for the fracas caused when I lost my diamong earring at your salon. You called to say you found it. My thought, “yeah, right; substitute in progress.” Pleasantly surprised untrue.

  6. Shari! Amazing comment! You should enter the writing challenge, click on the link at the top of this page and go for it! :)

  7. Hi,
    Well done on this one. :D

  8. Something tells me Sarah + Sid = seriously not happening…. :-)

  9. lol.. you are awesome!

  10. That’s easy for you to say! Well, ssssssssssssort of …..

    Cute story, Linda.

  11. My mind got all jumbled up just trying to read that! LOL! Didn’t know you could get tongue-tied in your brain! :)

  12. HahaCathe! You think that’s bad you should see my fingers! :b

  13. Here goes a ‘rookie attempt…. I am cetainly sorry that such a shockingly, disturbing accident should happen to your superb car being crushed between a cement truck and a garbage truck that resulted in it being just trash.. Had to try! lol Diane

    • Bravo Diane! Haha! Are you sure you’re a rookie? You should post it at the Trifecta site! I highly encourage you to go for it! The link is at the top of the post . . . Good luck! :)

  14. I just realized that I used your word ..’shockingly’ in my blurb…plageurism for sure lol Diane

  15. Such super scintillating sibilant syllables sure made me shake my rattle– ssssssimply ssssssssuberb, sssssssssistah!

  16. Fabulous, love your wit! :)

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